How Writing Is Evaluated (Portfolio model)
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Answer the analysis question in one or two sentences, comparing how feedback and revision are used in the two approaches. Write in My notes.
Concept: A portfolio model evaluates writing through drafts, feedback, and revision. Grades reflect your ability to apply feedback and improve—not a single timed performance.
Mechanism: You submit drafts, receive feedback aligned to criteria, revise, and submit again. The model rewards improvement and engagement with feedback. Assignments: A1 (pattern essay), A2 (peer feedback), A3 (revised portfolio essay).
Worked example: You submit a 200-word essay with a weak thesis. Feedback says "narrow your claim." You revise to a specific, arguable thesis and resubmit. The grade reflects the revised version, not the first draft.

Check your work
Check your notes:
- You explain that portfolio work develops through drafts, feedback and revision.
- You contrast this with a single exam response written without a later feedback-and-revision cycle.